Jan 9, 2013

WritTInG_OutLInE

SHOULD STUDENT BE ABLE TO GET A FREE CONDOMS AT SCHOOL IN MALAYSIA.

I. Introduction

No, students should not be able to get free comdoms at school in Malaysia because it was emotional unstable, can cause sexually transmitted diseases, and altenative to abortion.
 
II. Body
 
A   One of the reason for this issues is emotional unstable.
      1. Whatever if taken or not taken the protection, the sex still happen because it depends on their thinking (Amber, 2008)
 
         a) because its a influences from their peers and surrounding for example their friends have couple and their had a sex experience. 
         b) they want to try a something new.
         c) For example our goverment not really control the economic of pirates DVD and pornographic films.
         d) teenagers around 14 until 21, they still do not know themselves and they are still trying to find identity. Therefore there are always lost emotionally that they do not know to diffrent a good and a bad thing. 
 
B   Another reason can cause sexuallity transmitted diseases.
 
         a) Their have a sex and they not wearing a protection for example wearing a comdoms is a better way to prevent from any diseases (Michelle Reising, 2005).
         b) Always change their partner when they having a sex all the time for example sex in one night stand.
         c) from this we can know that this disease can transfer with free sex can transfer by performing sex actively which means semen comes into the ovum. So most probably the prengnancy cases will increase.
         d) For example transmitted disease such as HIV / AIDS, Cancer Cervic and venereal disease (STD).
 
C  In Malaysia the rate alternative to abortion are increases than another state.
          a) Malaysia have a lot of case involving teenagers especially those who are pregnant out of wed-lock (Rahimah Makol-Abdul Abu Sadat Nurullah, 2005).
          b) Abortion commonly happen to woman who does not feel ready to have a baby. Over 90% immatured are unprepared in physical, emotional, spiritual.
          c) Illegal clinics are provide for those young woman to do abortion beside her partner want her to have an abortion.
          d) For example teenagers who are pregnant and can afford to buy medicine, they usually take untrusted medicine from illegal clinics. On the other hand, for those who cannot afford, they take tradisional herbs and method like eating acidic food such as pineapple, carbonate drink and vinegar.
 
III. Conclusion
 
The lack knowledge and religious background in teenagers cause themselves to choose a wrong path. This teenagers mix with a person who has already experienced can influence teenagers to do the same thing. Give a condoms is not a good solution how to prevent this problem. So goverment and parents is a big  role  increating  our teenegers to become a good person. For example goverment should strengthen to give a permision to open new legal and trusted clinics. Parents should give space and try to become her  or his friends to their chidren. This can help the parents to know their children's friends, schools, and social life also problems. By a strong bond between a parent and their children, they will share thier problem together.

Jan 3, 2013

rEuPdAtE_IntROdUCtIOn tO wRIttInG

Should Homework Be Abolished In The School System
Since 2007, Malaysian are abolished a homework for all student at school. This is not right on education, including a university student too. There just do a lot of exercise only on the class and not at home. Without any homework at home, the children cannot received or recall what their teachers teach them at school. So, this is a srius thing to all teachers because their are give a educate the next generation like us. Parents are playing a big role too on this situation, if parent are not taking this problem seriusly their children may be an uneducated on the next day. How to prevent this problem from their children being an uneducated person? What will happen to our country on the next generation if the children are not exposed or didn't do some homeworks by giving from lectures or teachers starting now? For prevent our children being an uneducated person is with a slow talk from any motivators or do some campaign 'How To Be a Hardwoking Student Do Homework'. Beside that, our country will be at the back beside the other country. If this problem are not contained from right now, its will be harm and bring a lot of problem to our country at the future.

Jan 2, 2013

tHEsIs StatEmEnt

Should Students Be Able To Get Free Condoms At School in Malaysia
 
THESIS STATEMENT : No, students should not be able to get free comdoms at school in Malaysia because it was
(1) emotional unstable,
(2) can cause sexually transmitted diseases,
(3) altenative to abortion.
 
(1) emotional unstable : ' Sex is major decision among people of any age may result in emotional distress no matter what protection major are taken.
 
Title of Article : Give Teens Condoms in High School.
Author : Amber.
Year : 2008.
Date of Retrieved : 16 November 2012.
 
(2) can cause sexuallity transmitted diseases : 'starting that encourage immorality and actually increase the speed with which HIV / AIDS spread among teenagers who are responsible for the economic future of the country.
 
Title of Article : Health Psychology.
Author : Michelle Reising.
Year : 16 November 2005
Date of Retrieved : 16 November 2012.
 
(3) alternative to abortion : Abortions are most common where a woman does not feel ready tho have a baby or her partner wants her to have an abortion. Over 90% of all induced abortions are done for elective and not medical reasons.
 
Title: Parents' Attitudes Towards Inclusion of Sexuality Education In Malaysian Schools.
Author : Rahimah Makol-Abdul Abu Sadat Nurullah
Year : 2009
Date of Retrieved : 16 November 2012.
 
OTHER RELATED ARTICLES:
Title of Article : Sex Education, teenage pregnancy sex in Islam and marriage.
Author : Shahid Athar.
Date of Retrieved : 16 November 2012.
 
Title of Article : Zina and The Enigma of Sex Education.
Author : Bennett L.R.
Year : 2007.
Website : http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/14681810701635970
Date of Retrieved :
16 November 2012.